Monday, February 27, 2017

Writing compound sentences that include a prepositional phrase - a quick tutorial!

Hi, 7th graders.

I'm seeing that there's some confusion with the Word Voyage sentence requirements for Lesson 6. Here are the instructions broken down for you:

1. Write a compound sentence.
2. Properly punctuate that compound sentence using a comma+conjunction or a semicolon.
3. Somewhere within that compound sentence, use a prepositional phrase.
4. Underline at least one prepositional phrase (you'll sometimes have more than one without even trying). 

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Here is an example of the right way to do this:

We hiked all day, and then we set up camp at the base of the mountain.
(This sentence has two independent clauses joined by a comma and a conjunction. There are also two prepositional phrases.)

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Here as an example of the wrong way to do this:

At the base of the mountain, we set up camp. 
(Even though this sentence has two prepositional phrases, it does not have two independent clauses, so it is not a compound sentence.)

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Here is a list of common prepositions, should you need it:   http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/preposition_list.htm

If you're feeling confused, remember you can always come see me BEFORE submitting your sentences - I recommend it!

​Happy Word Voyaging! :)
-Mrs. Liu​

Friday, February 10, 2017

Congratulations! (And looking ahead . . . )

Congratulations, 7th graders, on meeting the challenge of the MacLane Recitation with such success. You all have so much to be proud of as we go into the weekend. 

A few reminders as we look ahead to next week:

1. Letter-essay (focused on imagery in your novel) due Monday. You should all have what you need to complete this assignment, including an example paragraph and checklist in your reader's notebook (from class discussion on Wednesday). 

2. The re-take for your first poetry terms quiz will be Tuesday. Keep reviewing the terms.

3. We will continue working on the revision of your winter prompts ("describe your ideal school") on both Tuesday and Thursday in class. The revisions will be due by the end of class on Thursday. If at all possible, bring a device to class on these writing days. 

Get some rest, enjoy the snow, and I'll look forward to reading about the beautiful imagery you've noticed on Monday!

Cheers,
Mrs. Liu